Andrew, this is really solid and very funny! The design work is consistent and convincing... you deliver certain simplicity that is both visually appealing and coherent in communicating your narrative. I really like how you build up that first scene, taking your time to show the sky with clouds... Gives me the time to build up my imagination of the place before I'm introduced to the actual plot. Solid, minimal use of sound.
Possible issues: pixelation is ok if you pick it consciously as your design element. However in your piece different objects have different amount of pixelation which is problematic (especially the plane). Also the rotation of the falling character could be a bit better controlled. Over all this is very successful.
Do you have any thoughts of what would you like to do for your final?
Whats up Andrew? This was cool. Though the plane can use a bit more detail, the sound added a lot and the guy's facial animation was awesome. Marcin's comment with the pixelation is also very applicable. Nicely done, man!
Andrew, this is really solid and very funny! The design work is consistent and convincing... you deliver certain simplicity that is both visually appealing and coherent in communicating your narrative.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you build up that first scene, taking your time to show the sky with clouds... Gives me the time to build up my imagination of the place before I'm introduced to the actual plot. Solid, minimal use of sound.
Possible issues: pixelation is ok if you pick it consciously as your design element. However in your piece different objects have different amount of pixelation which is problematic (especially the plane). Also the rotation of the falling character could be a bit better controlled. Over all this is very successful.
Do you have any thoughts of what would you like to do for your final?
Hi Marcin, thanks for the feedback. As of now, I'm going take about a week or two decide on my topic for my final project.
ReplyDeleteWhats up Andrew? This was cool. Though the plane can use a bit more detail, the sound added a lot and the guy's facial animation was awesome. Marcin's comment with the pixelation is also very applicable. Nicely done, man!
ReplyDeleteThanks Phil.
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