Hi Philip, as I mentioned before this is a fantastic first animation. You have the right attention to detail and clearly, patience. I think you also came up with the perfect narrative to be represented in 1 min...If I was to think of improving this design approach in the future I would consider adding more detail to objects that are suppose to appear as "big", for example the ship in the scene when the wings go up... I think the drawing should have more complexity to it... for the sake of your viewer's imagination. Would you consider developing this into a longer, final animation? Of course, sadly, we would know its tragic finale:)
Thanks Marcin! I will consider making a longer version with more detail. It may be in a similar vein at least. I am looking to improve on my photoshop a bit more as I am rusty. Thanks for the comment.
Hi Philip, as I mentioned before this is a fantastic first animation. You have the right attention to detail and clearly, patience. I think you also came up with the perfect narrative to be represented in 1 min...If I was to think of improving this design approach in the future I would consider adding more detail to objects that are suppose to appear as "big", for example the ship in the scene when the wings go up... I think the drawing should have more complexity to it... for the sake of your viewer's imagination. Would you consider developing this into a longer, final animation? Of course, sadly, we would know its tragic finale:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Marcin! I will consider making a longer version with more detail. It may be in a similar vein at least. I am looking to improve on my photoshop a bit more as I am rusty. Thanks for the comment.
Deletesounds great. do you have software access at home?
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ReplyDeleteThis video looks so cool. I like that sci-fi element you put into this video. I cannot wait to see the continuing version of your video.
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